Sitting, pretty, on the edge of our aphelion,
eating unseen forces like curds and whey.
In goes a galaxy, rolling underneath my tongue,
shrieking and dissolving fast; a tasty display.
Wash it down celestially with pure electron water.
Knife into dark energy, a savory filet.
Suck deep on a sour eclipse and giggle at the stir,
dip candied kings in quasar oil,
you want this one?
I’ll trade.
After we’re full,
we contemplate beginnings and the end;
I’ll fold today like a receipt,
don’t need that in my head.
amazing! after the first stanza I was hooked…well done Georgia. impressed
Thanks Step! You are very impressive yourself. I’m so glad to have connected with you!
The words just compliment each other and none of them seem like they are out of place.
Amazing! 🙂
Thank you ❤ that’s an amazing thing to say!
“In goes a galaxy, rolling underneath my tongue, shrieking and dissolving fast; a tasty display. Wash it down celestially with pure electron water.”
This is the most amazing line so in love with it 💜💜
Thank you! That’s so lovely of you to say 💜💜
Beautiful
so are you
Hah not more than your writings
❤
Love it!
Love YOU!