Your eyes prove
you were too good for this world,
supernatural blue,
what do you see with them?
(For eyes such as those could
scarcely stop seeing
regardless
of mere death.)
They are swirls of galaxies,
colliding into the minds of the gods,
who reel at your wonders,
and lay flaccid before your joys.
You are what is holy about life,
you are hugs from strangers,
and groceries left on porches,
and mended blankets,
and all that was left
of our hearts.
The world is blank
without your presence,
we are fatally wounded,
we will not survive,
and we should not
survive.
Her love
makes me love you,
and that is why you lived,
to be
loved,
and that is how you
live
on,
in our desperation
for your
eyes.
honestly Im circling a neew world!
Beautiful, though I did not know of him
Tender, oh so tender, tribute.
He is smiling down on these poems, Shrinks 🙂
Perfect, beautiful, and stinging. He was such a beautiful boy–and yes, those eyes tell it all. You did it, Shrinks. I am writing one about bathing the dead. have to.
oh, thank you. please, help me, Susan. I can’t say it all myself.
I have to do it, Shrinks.
That is why I love you.
I am not familiar with Ronan can anyone link me?
The previous posts have the links.
Thanks…just read up on the boy and the poem…how do i choose words anymore to describe how you write…Like does not justify you and words cant even be closer to what you put out here..so just speechless and like( infinitesimal times more)
thank you so much. he is worth more…it is breaking me.
I’ve nominated you for a Liebster because I love your words
Wow, thank you so much.
This IS so beautiful but I am embarrassed to admit that I do not know who Ronan is.
I know now, partially. Your tribute is outstanding.
I wish it was worthy.
this is beautiful
You “seduce” your readers with a sensuality and phraseology that is unique and quite wonderful. “..lay flaccid before your joys”
Breathtaking . I’m going to stalk your poems from now on , you have been warned :p
beautiful
~
only you could
breathe out
the world’s bile
into meaningful
loving
poetic smiles
~
I’m so thankful
for you
you make me cry.
Oh lovely brilliant you wrote about him, he was indeed a god for his innocent eyes it had the depth of a universe
I loved it Shrink, at least it touched a soul which I intended
you visit that blog of his and you will cry
thank you
I spent all day at his blog, thank you for posting it.
I have posted some videos on that post
Tylor Swft paying tribute to Ronan Baby
please see that video and other videos also
you will love it.
Shrinks you have a heart of Gold, I have seen it full of compassion and love, but somehow hurt somewhere
I dont know but I love you my friend
dont misunderstand me I am also like you
i love children
I know. I love your compassion, as well, my dear friend.
please see those videos
I see it in your poems but sometimes that anger comes out
Strangely, anger leads to compassion, and vice versa.
oh great
only a poet can say those words
Perhaps we are just the only ones brave enough to admit realities…
thanks dear
but as me you are hurt somewhere deep within
dont tell me but I know
I can read the sorrow in your eyes
and read between the lines
i dont have to follow words
you are right.
that’s it I knew it from the start I saw the eyes below the glares
you play classical piano???
No…I am only self-taught.
oh than you play nice