He is a god.
Watch him love me.
Watch him rip you limb from limb.
Watch as he destroys your golden
idols that were meant for him.
He is a god.
Watch him love me.
Watch him rip the rivers wide;
watch as bodies flood the shores and
everyone but me has died.
He is a god.
Watch him love me.
Watch us run through meadows deep
with the blood of earth’s elations;
into dripping arms I leap.
He is a god.
Watch him love me.
Watch our slippery bodies grope
at each other in the mire
of lucid lies and buried hope.
He is a god.
Watch him love me.
Watch the population cease.
Dreamy-eyed, he gazes at me,
“See, now we can be at peace.”
He is a god.
Watch him love me.
Watch the emptied earth sing out.
I’m the only anybody;
watch him live to hear me shout.
I saw this on Slacktivist just now, and I have no idea what I think or feel about it, just that I do, and thank you, thank you, I am thankful for it and for you.
How kind, thank you so very much.
you are incredible
Wow, you are too kind!
no i think your language and the expression is perhaps amongst the best.
why dont you compile the poems and publish them
working on that. sort of. i have never published anything before.
ok but people will like it I am confident
there are many other bloggers who do this and sell their small book for $2 on the net
you dont do it like them please
your grade is different please do it
thank you so much, I am definitely trying.
Catchy blog name.
You are apparently an interesting writer.
Trailed you from another blog.
If I didn’t know better, I’d say your writing was ironic and cynical, a religious satire kindda. It’s a fascinating writing. You love this god?
Thank you so much. Do I love this god? Yes, I must.
That is really par excellence. My Goddess will really appreciate this one.
I’m glad : )
wow! I love the confident power in this!
thank you so much.
wow, truly beautiful writing
thank you so much.
Oh my god! This incredible.
Glad you think so : )
Super steamy my gosh!
Oh, honey, scroll down 😉
Yikes – a narcissist’s God seems pretty dangerous – a rather chilling vision powerfully imagined. k.
thank you.
…now the earth’s emptied out, me and my god…we’ll love till the end of ends… brilliant……
glad you liked it.
“Now I am become death, the destroyer of worlds”
Oppenheimer, the megalomaniac. I reads differently in Sanskrit.
I know this God. Love it, thanks for the follow on my dancingwithdecolonization/reclaimthewarrior blog. 🙂
your writing is marvelous.
Love, love, love this one!
thank you!
Hold on tight.
pick a universe…
all of them.
I love this! I especially like the last three lines. Sooo good!
I so glad you do, thank you.
gods are funny chaps. Quite temperamental, i hear 😉
universes are so far superior. they just leave well enough alone. 😀
Wise
but this particular god i write of, i would still follow him to the ends of any universe.
Just remember to bring your towel!
🙂
“Lucid lies”: very interesting. Alliteration rarely works in my experience but here it’s fantastic- oily and sinuous on the tongue.
Beautiful comment, thank you ever so much.
Wow!
Thats all I got
thanks : )